Molly
I used to have just some students but these days, I have a lot more in a short time, exactly 6 students in 3 days. I felt a little overwhelmed at first but gradually got used to it but I am just a bit busier worrying for the quality of teaching. However, I will try my best to make sure I can cover all of them.
10 янв. 2025 г., 5:14
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I used to have only a few students but in the last few days, I have gotten a lot more in a short amount of time, exactly 6 students in 3 days. I felt a little overwhelmed at first but gradually got used to it. I am a bit busier now so I am worried about the quality of my teaching. However, I will try my best to make sure I can handle all of them.
10 янв. 2025 г., 8:32
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I used to have only a few students, but am these days far busier. Indeed, six have come to me in just three days. A little overwhelmed at first, I have gradually adjusted to the bustle. At the same time, worries over the quality of my teaching do trouble me a bit. Pushing those worries aside, I will do my best to handle my new increased workload. I have rewritten your sentences so that none but the first begins with "I", and "I" is used three times instead of six. As a matter of style, it is preferable not to start many sentences and clauses with "I". ALL of your sentences and clauses start, or almost start, with "I". Persistent use of "I" as a subject makes your writing appear to be self-centered. The suggestions I have made are intended to show you some ways to avoid creating this effect.
10 янв. 2025 г., 13:23
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I used to have just a few students but recently, I have gained several more within a short time period — 6 students in 3 days to be precise. I felt a little overwhelmed at first, but I have gradually gotten used to it. However I am now busy worrying about the quality of my teaching. However, I will try my best to make sure I can cover them all.
10 янв. 2025 г., 15:33
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I used to have only a few students but these days, I have been quickly gaining a lot more students: 6 students in 3 days to be more precise. I felt a little overwhelmed at first but but I gradually got used to it. Now I am just a bit busier worrying about the quality of my teaching. However, I will try my best to make sure I can provide for all my students.
I hope you'll manage to remain as successful as possible in your teaching journey Molly, I'm sure your students appreciate your efforts.
10 янв. 2025 г., 12:46
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I used to have only a few students, but recently, I’ve gained a lot more in a short period—exactly six students in just three days. At first, I felt a little overwhelmed, but I gradually got used to it. Still, I’m a bit busier now, as I’m concerned about maintaining the quality of my teaching. However, I’ll do my best to ensure I can meet all their needs.
Tip for Improvement: - Clarity and Conciseness: Simplify where possible without losing meaning. For example, replacing "worrying for the quality of teaching" with "concerned about maintaining the quality of my teaching" makes the sentence sound more natural. - Word Choice: Use "only" instead of "just" when talking about a small quantity for more polished phrasing. - Transitions: Use linking words like "still" and "however" effectively to improve flow and coherence. By refining your word choice and structure, your writing will sound more fluent and professional.
10 янв. 2025 г., 12:02
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китайский (путунхуа), английский, французский, японский, корейский, вьетнамский
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китайский (путунхуа), английский, французский, японский, корейский