Can you correct my text please ? Thank you in advance. I used to practise Yoga before and i noticed some benefits .My mindset starts to change .I had started to think more positiv in my life .The anot

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Can you correct my text please ? Thank you in advance. I used to practise Yoga before and i noticed some benefits .My mindset starts to change .I had started to think more positiv in my life .The another benefit is my body came more flexibal and i feel like it is relaxing . It is good to have some activity in our life and yoga can be first step to have some activity .

25 окт. 2024 г., 17:19

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I used to practise yoga before and I noticed some benefits. My mindset started to change. I started to think more positively in my life. Another benefit is my body became more flexible and I felt more relaxed. It is good to have some activity in our life and yoga can be a first step to have some activity.

Some corrections above. I've had similar benefits from yoga in my life as well 🧘‍♀️. Thanks for sharing and practicing your writing!

30 окт. 2024 г., 10:39

Can you correct my text please ? Thank you in advance. I used to practise Yoga before and i noticed some benefits .My mindset started to change .I had started to think more positively in my life .Then, another benefit is that my body became more flexible and i felt like it was relaxing . It is good to have some activity in our life and yoga can be first step to have some activity .

Just pay attention to what tense you're using! Very good though, and I appreciate the positive subject matter.

25 окт. 2024 г., 17:26

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