Joey
The unique culture of Beijing Beijing is my hometown, and it is in the north of China. Beijing is the capital of China. To a certain degree, Beijing is one of the represent of china. If you have a trip to China, you definitely should come to Beijing. So, let me introduce what makes Beijing unique. First, there are many beautiful places of interest all around the city, such as the forbidden city、the summer palace、the great wall, etc... why there are so many places of interest in Beijing? Beijing is an old city with 3000 years of history. Beijing is the capital of many different dynasties. Every dynasty has its own character. So if you come to Beijing, you can feel the ages changes in history, you will get to know about the country’s historical and cultural heritage. Second, Beijing food is one of the things you definitely can’t miss. There are many different kinds of food you can enjoy. Peking duck, Zhajiang noodles, candied hawthorn... trust me, you can find what you like in Beijing ! not only Beijing specialties, you can also find delicious food from all around China even the world. If you are a foodie, Beijing will be your good choice to go. Last but not least, Beijing people are the most unique culture of Beijing. They are friendly、hospitable、 enthusiastic. They welcome everyone from all over the world. If you are a foreigner and have been to Beijing before, you must have felt about what I’m saying. If you come to Beijing and meet your Beijing's friend, he or she definitely will treat you to a big meal. Beijing is my hometown and I’m proud of its unique culture. If you are interested in Beijing's culture or you just want to try Beijing's delicious food, don’t hesitate to come to Beijing and feel about it.
22 нояб. 2020 г., 4:51
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The unique culture of Beijing Beijing is my hometown, and it is in the north of China. Beijing is the capital of China. To a certain degree, Beijing is one of the represent of china. If you have a trip to China, you definitely should come to Beijing. So, let me introduce what makes Beijing unique. First, there are many beautiful places of interest all around the city, such as the forbidden city、the summer palace、the great wall, etc... why there are so many places of interest in Beijing? Beijing is an old city with 3000 years of history. Beijing is the capital of many different dynasties. Every dynasty has its own character. So if you come to Beijing, you can feel the ages changes in history, you will get to know about the country’s historical and cultural heritage. Second, Beijing food is one of the things you definitely can’t miss. There are many different kinds of food you can enjoy. Peking duck, Zhajiang noodles, candied hawthorn... trust me, you can find what you like in Beijing ! not only Beijing specialties, you can also find delicious food from all around China even the world. If you are a foodie, Beijing will be your good choice to go. Last but not least, Beijing people are the most unique culture of Beijing. They are friendly、hospitable、 enthusiastic. They welcome everyone from all over the world. If you are a foreigner and have been to Beijing before, you must have felt about what I’m saying. If you come to Beijing and meet your Beijing's friend, he or she definitely will treat you to a big meal. Beijing is my hometown and I’m proud of its unique culture. If you are interested in Beijing's culture or you just want to try Beijing's delicious food, don’t hesitate to come to Beijing and feel about it.
Joey, this is really nice. I’ve always wanted to visit Beijing, and your essay makes me want to visit it even more! Your grammar is very good. I have just one thing to say: in English, we do not use the list comma (、). So we write: “They are friendly, hospitable, and enthusiastic.” (Notice also that I used the word “and” before the last item in the list.)
22 ноября 2020 г.
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