I have two kids, i arrange some extra activities for them in weedend. We spend a 1st half day at school, and 2nd half day in the swimming pool. We will have dinner in the evening. This is our family

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SIN KA HIM, Perry

I have two kids, i arrange some extra activities for them in weedend. We spend a 1st half day at school, and 2nd half day in the swimming pool. We will have dinner in the evening. This is our family routine activity in the summer. On sunday morning, i will send my elder son to learn drum, we will go library after the lesson. Any Special plan to somewhere will be arranged to do on sunday, we would love to dine out in a indian restaurant because of his delicious yummy food. I didn't have idea in this weekend yet, because i am having a night duty in this week that make me feel tired. However, i enjoy every little moment with my family even we do nothing at home. Thank you.

30 сент. 2024 г., 7:02

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I have two kids and I arrange some extra activities for them at the weekend. We spent 1st half of the day at school, and 2nd half in the swimming pool. We will have dinner in the evening. This is our family routine activity the summer. On sunday morning, I will send my older son to learn the drums, we will go to the library after the lesson. Any special plans to go somewhere will be arranged on sunday, we would love to dine out in a Indian restaurant because of its delicious yummy food. I didn't have an idea for this weekend yet, because I will be having night duty this week and that makes me feel tired. However, I enjoy every little moment with my family even if we do nothing at home. Thank you.

The key difference between elder and older is that elder is used to indicate a hierarchy or seniority in a family or group, while older refers only to age / Its with no apostrophe, on the other hand, is the possessive word, like "his" and "her," for nouns without gender.

30 сент. 2024 г., 12:52

I have two kids, I arranged some extra activities for them at the weekend. We spent the first half of the day at school, and the second half at the swimming pool. We had dinner in the evening. This is our family routine in the summer. On sunday morning, i will send my elder son to learn the drums, we will go to library after the lesson. Any Special plan to go somewhere will be arranged to do on sunday, we would love to dine out in a Indian restaurant because of its delicious yummy food. I didn't have any ideas for this weekend yet, because i am on night duty this week and that makes me feel tired. However, i enjoy every little moment with my family even when do nothing at home. Thank you.

Well done…not bad. I was confused though about your tenses. Are you writing about what you did last weekend? Or do every weekend? Or what you will do next weekend? Your tenses kept changing, so I wasn’t sure. I’ve corrected it as if you were telling us about last weekend, so I’ve put everything in past simple for you.

30 сент. 2024 г., 7:53

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