Kaori
90 day's training: Day 19 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I listen to classic music particularly orchestra nowadays. I believe it might shape my music sense. 2) I like watching some instruments who plays melody when I visit a concert. Then, I always think about the composer. 3) I am listening to or watching a video of a summer concert by Vienna Philharmonic orchestra during I am writing this text. 4) My husband feels like listening the concert now, so he has started the video. 5) I want to watch a continuance of a German drama which I watched before I started working today.
30 сент. 2024 г., 12:57
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90 day's training: Day 19 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I listen to classical music particularly orchestra nowadays. I believe it might shape my music sense. 2) I like watching some instruments which play melodies when I visit a concert. Then, I always think about the composer. 3) I am listening to, or watching a video of a summer concert by Vienna Philharmonic orchestra while I am writing this text. 4) My husband feels like listening to the concert now, so he just started the video. 5) I want to continue watching German drama which I watched before I have started working today.
1 окт. 2024 г., 7:23
90 day's training: Day 19 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I listen to classical music, particularly orchestral music nowadays. I believe it might shape my music(al) sense. 2) I like watching the instruments that play the melody when I go to/attend a concert. Then, I always think about the composer. 3) I am listening to or watching a video of a summer concert by the Vienna Philharmonic Orchestra while I am writing this. 4) My husband feels like listening to the concert now, so he has started the video. 5) I want to watch the next episode of a German drama which/that I watched before I started working today.
Instrments THAT play, or Instrumentalists WHO play. (Who is for people/living creatures). Capitalize Orchestra if it's part of a proper name. Nice job!
1 окт. 2024 г., 6:47
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