Anzhela
Can you correct please? My bestie and I decided to participate in a bike competition. We agreed to finish together because we both wanted to win first place but we didn't want to compete against each other. Unfortunately, during the competition, I fell and hurt my knee, so I couldn't continue. She was a good friend and didn't want to continue without me, but I convinced her to continue . she took first place.🥇
10 нояб. 2024 г., 7:27
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Can you correct please? My bestie and I decided to participate in a bike competition. We agreed to finish together because we both wanted to win first place but we didn't want to compete against each other. Unfortunately, during the competition, I fell and hurt my knee, so I couldn't continue. She was a good friend and didn't want to continue without me, but I convinced her to continue . she took first place.🥇 Lovely piece of writing Anzhela. Well done! And if it’s a true story, get better soon
10 нояб. 2024 г., 9:58
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My best friend and I decided to participate in a bike competition. We agreed to finish together because we both wanted to win first place but didn’t want to compete against each other. Unfortunately, during the competition, I fell and hurt my knee, so I couldn’t continue. She was a good friend and didn’t want to go on without me, but I convinced her to keep going. She ended up taking first place. 🥇
14 нояб. 2024 г., 14:17
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Here’s a refined version of your story for clarity and flow: My best friend and I decided to enter a bike race together. We agreed to finish at the same time because we both wanted to win first place, but didn’t want to compete against each other. Unfortunately, during the race, I fell and injured my knee, so I couldn’t continue. She was a true friend and didn’t want to go on without me, but I convinced her to finish the race. In the end, she took first place! 🥇 This version corrects minor grammar and improves readability while keeping your story intact. It sounds heartfelt and clear—nice work!
11 нояб. 2024 г., 4:07
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10 нояб. 2024 г., 10:24
Can you correct please? Here’s a polished version of your text: My best friend and I decided to participate in a bike race. We agreed to finish together because we both wanted to win first place, but we didn't want to compete against each other. Unfortunately, during the race, I fell and hurt my knee, so I couldn’t continue. She was a good friend and didn’t want to go on without me, but I convinced her to keep going. In the end, she took first place. 🥇
I made some minor adjustments for clarity and flow: 1. Changed "bike competition" to "bike race" ’ it’s a bit more commonly used. 2. Adjusted punctuation and phrasing slightly to improve readability. 3. Added "In the end" for a smooth transition to the final result. It’s a great story of friendship and perseverance!
11 нояб. 2024 г., 11:12
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