This is so good! A few corrections of things i caught... "Whose name is..." you used this to name th village. I would use "and its name is..." as the village is not a person. So "Who/Whose" is wrong. You also say "I live in a small portion of the village" I think "I live in a small portion of it" as we already know you are talking about the village, so its redundant. You also say "5000 living", the word "living" is redundant, you don't need to add it to the end of that sentence.

Anyone want speak with me.? Trought WhatsApp. Dejen su numero. NATIVE ENGLISH OR SPEAKERS. I speak spanish, I am native.