Today I had a part time job. I work part time job at fast food restaurant. I worked for five hours. I was very tired because a lot of customers came. I want to buy a lot of clothes so I have to work a

Yuiko

Today I had a part time job. I work part time job at fast food restaurant. I worked for five hours. I was very tired because a lot of customers came. I want to buy a lot of clothes so I have to work a lot.

20 апр. 2025 г., 9:07

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Today, I had a part-time job. I work at a fast food restaurant. I worked for five hours and was very tired because a lot of customers came in. I want to buy a lot of clothes, so I have to work a lot.

Hi Yuiko! It sounds like you had a busy day at your part-time job! You did a great job sharing how tiring it can be when many customers come in. I admire your motivation to work hard for the clothes you want. For improvement, focus on using complete sentences to make your writing flow better. Keep up the great work!

20 апр. 2025 г., 20:43

Today I had to work part time. I work part time at a fast food restaurant and I had to work for five hours. I was very tired because a lot of customers came. I want to buy a lot of clothes so I have to work a lot.

20 апр. 2025 г., 10:00

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