<em>Very good, Pablo. I am in a bit of a rush, so I will just pick out the main grammatical issues that jump out at me. Having said that, this is mostly very good.</em>

Composition about advantages and disadvantages of being famous

This is a composition I have done for homework:

The majority of people would like to be famous, because it seems to be the perfect job. Being famous bring you the opportunity for everybody to know about you and your work, and for you to gaining respect and public recognition. In addition, famouse people can live a life full of luxury because of the money they earn in their works. For instance, good actors in Hollywood can earn  more than thirty million dollars for one of their movies.

This all seems very tempting. However there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is that famous people have no private life. There are paparazzis who follow them twenty-four hours a day wherever they go. For example, a simple task like going shopping with your family can be something difficult because of the people that follow you to take photos or ask you for an autograph. Another disadvantage is that people start rumors about celebrities that can affect them in many different ways because of the horrible things that people can say.

In conclusion, being famous could seem a great thing at the first sign but you have to consider all the bad aspects that it has and how it can change your life, because your business is not only yours anymore, it's everybody's apparently.

Composition about advantages and disadvantages of being famous

This is a composition I have done for homework:

The majority of people would like to be famous, because it seems to be the perfect job. Being famous brings you many opportunities, and everybody know about you and your work, you can gain respect and public recognition. In addition, famous people can live a life full of luxury because of the money they earn. in their works. For instance, good actors in Hollywood can earn more than thirty million dollars just for one of their movies.

This all seems very tempting, however there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is that famous people have no private life. There are paparazzis who follow them twenty-four hours a day wherever they go. For example, a simple task like going shopping with your family can be something difficult because of the people that follow you to take photos or ask you for an autograph. Another disadvantage is that people start rumors about celebrities that can affect them in many different ways because of the horrible things that people can say.

In conclusion, being famous could seem a great thing at the first sign but you have to consider all the bad aspects that comes with it and how it can change your life, because your business is not only yours anymore, it's everybody's apparently.

Very well written and very little to correct. Yes I would like the money but not the hassle.

Composition about advantages and disadvantages of being famous

This is a composition I have done for homework:

The majority of people would like to be famous, because it seems to be the perfect job. Being famous brings you the opportunity for everybody to know about you and your work, gaining respect and public recognition. In addition, famouse people can live a life full of luxury because of the money they earn in their works. For instance, good actors in Hollywood can earn more than thirty million dollars for one of their movies.

This all seems very tempting, however there are some disadvantages. The main disadvantage is that famous people have no private life. There are paparazzis who follow them twenty-four hours a day wherever they go. For example, a simple task like going shopping with your family can be something difficult because of the people that follow you to take photos or ask you for an autograph. Another disadvantage is that people start rumors about celebrities that can affect them in many different ways because of the horrible things that people can say.

In conclusion, being famous could seem a great thing at the first sign, but you have to consider all of its bad aspects and how it can change your life, because your business is not only yours anymore, it's everybody's apparently.

This is good! There were only some minor errors. I think that a couple things, like the addition of extra letters onto a word, may have even just been typos.