Oky Ikhramullah
introduction myself and the future plans,please correction my writing, thanks a lot. My name is oky ikhramullah, i come from ABDYA and i have a simple family, i have mother dan my fanther has died, then i have one brother and one sister, him age is 23 0ld and my sister is 25 old, i love my family, my brother have finished study in the Unsyiah Universty and my sister too. i have many hobies like Swimming, Football, listen the music n read the books, i love reading book about the sciene, it is very instereting for me and i often swimming too because it is can be make me health. Sometime i am also played foot ball at the Tugu yield in Unysiah Darussalam. And I love listening to music, i like Green day, Jason mras, and Maher zain, they songs is very good. I like speak english cause english language is very important, many books has writted in english language because that english language is too important. And now i am studying about geophysical engeneering in the unsyiah university, I really like the science of geophysics because its very interesting and challenging, moreover geophysical sciences also have good prospects for the future in which humans require a source of energy for life on the earth. Geophysics are also learning about the working mechanism of the earth like an Earthquake, Stunami, Volcanic eruption, et cetera. This is a little thing that I tell about the Geophysic. By the way My future plans so many, First I wanna learn the English language and then I will improve my English further. n i hope i can finish my study to long 4 year, after i have finished my study S1 i will to continue my study to abroad for master and i am too hope i can get professor tittle and then I would apply for a job in the oil and gas company in overseas, many things I want to learn next and now i have to prepare like learn english language, Japanese and I also studied the German language so that later I could work in the german and live there, I also have a lot of interacting with strangers through Waplog, Facebook, Wechat and sites that I like the most is Italki, Italki site is a site that I think is very good because there we can learn various foreign languages and directly from they and there we can also teach others to speak our language , Italki is web education is one of the great and exciting. The future i want married with good woman and I sincerely hope i have good family. I love tranveling because that i wish visited many country and meet other people and culture. I would like to live abroad like Qatar, German or Japan. please correction. :D
6 июня 2013 г., 12:59
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introduction myself and the future plans,please correction my writing, thanks a lot.

My name is oky ikhramullah, i come from ABDYA and i have a simple family, i have mother and my father has died, then I have one brother and one sister, his age is 23 years old and my sister is 25 years old, i love my family, my brother have finished studying in the Unsyiah Universty and my sister too. i have many hobbies like Swimming, Football, listening the to music and read the books, I love reading book about the science, it is very interesting for me and im often swimming too because it is can be make me healthy. Sometimes i am also playing football at the Tugu yield in Unysiah Darussalam. And I love listening to music, i like Green day, Jason Mras, and Maher Zain, thier songs is are very good. I like speak english cause english language is very important, many books has are written in english language because that english language is too important. And now i am studying about geophysical engineering in the unsyiah university, I really like the science of geophysics because it's very interesting and challenging, moreover geophysical sciences also have good prospects for the future in which humans require a source of energy for life on the earth. Geophysics are also learning about the working mechanism of the earth like an Earthquake, Tsunami, Volcanic eruption, et cetera. This is a little thing that I tell about the Geophysic.
By the way My I have so many future plans so many, First I want to learn the English language and then I will improve my English further. And I hope I can finish my study to long in 4 years, after I have finished my study S1 I will to continue my study to abroad for master and I am too hoping I can get the title of professor tittle and then I would apply for a job in the oil and gas company in overseas, many the things I want to learn next and now I have to prepare like learn the english language, Japanese and I also studied the German language so that later I could work in the Germany and live there, I also have a lot of interaction with strangers through Waplog, Facebook, Wechat and the site that I like the most is Italki, Italki site is a site that I think is very good because there we can learn various foreign languages and directly from them and there we can also teach others to speak our language, Italki is web educational and is one of the great and exciting.
The future i want to get married with a good woman and I sincerely hope I have a good family. I love travelling because that i wish i visit many countries and meet other people and know thier culture. I would like to live abroad like Qatar, German or Japan. please correct. :D

 

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