Vinh Phan
The development of the village of Kelsbey Question: The diagram below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Answer: The diagram illustrates the expansion of village over a two hundred and twenty-year period from 1780 to 2000 in Kelsby. It can be obvious to see that there are three stages in the picture to expressing the difference about architecture and lifestyle of people in here. The first stage in 1780, woods occupy most of area in the picture whereas the village is just 100 homes. It is clear that there is no bridge or complicated structure in here. After an eighty-years period, there were some structure had been constructed; for example, bride and road were appeared. In contrast, the area of woods and farm were restricted. Besides, the homes in village was double with two hundred household. The last picture, there are some new structures with appearing of school and sports field, especially there is a wetland for birds. Those indicate the development of people into conceiving about the significance of environment and education in the future. Overall, there are lots of changing in architecture and lifestyle; people tend to living in groups and they are more attended to the environment and education than the past time, but the considerable of changes are affecting directly to animal habitat.
27 сент. 2013 г., 22:59
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The development of the village of Kelsbey

Question:
The diagram below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Answer:

The diagram illustrates the expansion of the village of Kelsby over a two hundred and twenty year period from 1780 to 2000 in Kelsby. It can be obvious to see clearly seen that there are three stages in the picture to expressing showing the changes in difference about architecture and lifestyle of people in there.

In the first stage in 1780, woods occupy most of the area in the picture whereas and the village is comprises just 100 homes. It is clear that There is no bridge or complicated structure in there.

 

After an Eighty-years later period, there were some structure had have been constructed; for example, a bridge and road were have appeared. In contrast, and the area of woods and farms is reduced were restricted. Besides, the homes Houses in the village was doubled with to two hundred households.

 

In the last picture for the year 2000, there are some new structures with appearing of school and sports field appearing, and especially there is a wetland for birds especially evident. Those indicate the development of people into conceiving that the community has become aware of about the significance of environment and education in the future.

Overall, there are lots of changing in architecture and lifestyle; people tend to living in groups and they are more attentiveded to the environment and education than in the past time, but the considerable of changes are directly affecting directly to the animal habitat.

 

<em>Not very well organised or thought through; I'd make a small table 1780, 1860, 2000 with houses, buildings, farms, woods perhaps as the columns; then discuss the table.</em>

27 сентября 2013 г.
Thank for your help, I forgot to apply the information in my text. Thanks
28 сентября 2013 г.
Just one comment, you can also summarize the destruction of the forest. In 2000, there were no more tree in the village.
28 сентября 2013 г.
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