Love, Wealth and Success Love, Wealth and Success A woman saw three old men sitting in front of her house. She invited them to come into her house and eat something. But they said that only one, no

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Love, Wealth and Success Love, Wealth and Success A woman saw three old men sitting in front of her house. She invited them to come into her house and eat something. But they said that only one, not two or three of them, could accept her invitation. They introduced themselves, "I am Wealth, they are Success and Love," and said "Please choose only one among us. Would you discuss with your husband?" Hearing the story, her husband was very pleased and said, "Let's invite Mr. Wealth, then our home will be full of wealth." But the woman did not agree and said, "Why don't you choose Mr. Sucess?" They argued and argued relentlessly. Daughter-in-law heard their quarrel and suggested, "I think it is better to invite Mr. Love. Then, you can stop the quarrel and our home will be full of love." The husband and wife accepted her suggestion. The woman went out and asked Mr. Love to come in. When Mr. Love started to walk towards the house, the other two man, surprisingly, followed him. The woman asked them joyfully, "I invited Mr. Love, why you two also come along?" One of them replied, "If you invite Wealth or Success, the others must stay outside. But you select Mr. Love. Only in that case, we can move together. Whenever and wherever Love goes, Wealth and Sucess follow. "Wealth without Love" or "Sucess without Love" is lonely and sad." (It is a translation of a text in Korean received from one of my friends.)

7 янв. 2014 г., 8:30

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Love, Wealth and Success

A woman saw three old men sitting in front of her house. She invited them to come into her house and eat something. But they said that only one, not two or three of them, could accept her invitation. They introduced themselves, "I am Wealth, they are Success and Love," and said "Please choose only one among us. Would you like to discuss this with your husband?"

After hearing the story, her husband was very pleased and said, "Let's invite Mr.Wealth, then our home will be full of wealth." But the woman did not agree and said, "Why don't you choose Mr. Success?" They argued and argued relentlessly.

Their daughter-in-law heard their quarrel and suggested, "I think it's better to invite Mr. Love. Then, you can stop the quarrel and our home will be full of love." The husband and wife accepted her suggestion.

The woman went out and asked Mr. Love to come in. When Mr. Love started to walk towards the house, the other two man men followed him. The woman asked them joyfully, "I invited Mr. Love, why are you two also coming? along?" One of them replied, "If you invite Wealth or Success, the others must stay outside. But you chose Mr. Love. Only in that case, will we move together. Whenever and wherever Love goes, Wealth and Sucess follow. "Wealth without Love" or "Success without Love" is lonely and sad.

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Wow! Great job translating! This is a very inspiring story with a great moral. I think some of the main mistakes were differentiating from the Past and Present. Remember, if an action has already happened, even 5 seconds ago, it will be considered the Past. Like "But you chose Mr.Love". Good work here and I hope to hear more stories!

8 января 2014 г.

Your comment is also a good essay! Thank you, and I will read your essay at least ten times.

8 января 2014 г.

good essay, thanks for sharing it, I agree with the point, without love, wealth and success are meaningless and useful, on ther other hand, avoiding low quality love is essential, if love makes a person weak and lazy, then it is wrong, love is based on understanding and trivial reality. on the other hand, if love comes with wealth and succuss, it is like a fairy tale that occurs rarely or never. but as a famous saying goes, 贫贱夫妻百日哀。(mean: poor couples are depressed . ), love cant last without any material basis and ambitions, since 民以食为天（food is the paramount of nessassity of peple. ）, then饱暖思淫欲（proper meaning: "When one is fed and warmed ， one's sexual desires will come up ." but there, mostly, not just sexual desire but all of desires apart from food and warmth. I think I didnt explain my viewpoint clearly, because compare with that , I prefer to give you some Chinese phrases, may they help for ur study.

8 января 2014 г.

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