My big rabbit

I bought two little rabbits two years ago: the first one was of the white and yellow colors ,the other one was fully black. But i've got only the second rabbit now, because the first one has already died. That black rabbit is 2 years old, his name is Papa, he is very big, he looks like a dog and many people tell me about it. He is very clever and clingy, he always likes standing. he knows how to go to the bathroom and ask food from me to feed him. But now, I am going back to school, so, I've brought him to my friend's house, I will see him in several months, I am missing you.
<em>(Or: Soon I will go back to school, so I will bring him to my friend's house... -- depends on whether you've already started studying or</em> not)


Your rabbit looks very pretty and sweet!... And I really hope you will see him soon! :-)

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My big rabbit

I bought two little rabbit two years ago,the one is white and yellow color ,the other one is black.(combine the first two sentences into one sentence) But i just have one now,because one of them already died.(make this sentence more concise)That black rabbit is 2 years old,(no need to mention the rabbit's age since you imply his age in the first sentence)his name is papa,he is very big,he looks like a dog and many people say it.(avoid the use of the word "it")He is very clever and clingy,he always like standing.he knows go to washroom to toilet and asks food from me.But now,i will go back to school,so ,i put him in my friends home,(make into two sentences since they are about two different things)i will see him after several months,i miss you(incorrect pronoun since you are not writing this letter to the rabbit).

Two years ago, I bought two little rabbits, a white and yellow rabbit and a black rabbit. The white and yellow rabbit died. The black rabbit is called Papa. He is huge now. Many people say, he looks like a small dog. However, he is very clever but clingy. He likes standing on his hind legs. He knows how to use the toilet and when to ask for food.

Now I must leave him since I'm returning to college. So I asked a friend to take care of him. I will miss him.

My big rabbit

I bought two little rabbits two years ago. One was white and yellow color, the other one was black. But I just have the black one now, because one of them the other one has already died. That black rabbit is 2 years old, his name is Papa and he is very big. He looks like a dog and many people say it mention it. He is very clever and clingy, and he always likes standing. He knows how to use the toilet and asks me for food. But now,i will go back to school,so ,i put him in my friends home But now that I am going back to school, I will leave him at my friend's house (or: leave him with my friend/ or: take him to my friend's house). i will see him after several months,i miss you. (Suggestion: I won't see him for several months, and will miss him)