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Please, check me As soon as I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smile. I have beeN waiting the envelope for three weeks so it was my employment contract. I am a physiotherapist and I finished my degree three weeks ago. I was looking for some job on the internet until I found one. This job was in Almería and it was part-time. I had to send my curriculum vitae to the company and they will send my employment contract soon. I didn´t know if I had to hand-write it but I sent it. I was very nervous because this job was very important for me so it was my first job. I didn´t know if had written my curriculum vitae well but when I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smile so my contract was handwritten. Now, I am looking for a flat in Almería so I start to work next week. I am very nervous so I will be alone in a city but I think I get used. I have to carry a lot of things so I will be in Almeria for a long time. My parentes and brothers have to come with me so I need two cars for carring all things. I hope we have a good journey.
14 июня 2014 г., 19:04
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As soon as I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smiled. I have been waiting for this the envelope for three weeks, so it was my employment contract. I am a Physiotherapist and I finished my degree three weeks ago. I was looking for some a job on the internet until and I found one. This job was is in Almería and it was part-time. I had to send my Curriculum Vitae to the company and they will would send my employment contract soon. I wasn't sure whether didn´t know if I had to hand-write it but I sent it.
I was very nervous because this job was is very important for to me so as it was is my first job. I didn´t know if had written my Curriculum Vitae properly, well but when I saw the handwriting on the envelope I smiled so as my contract was handwritten.

Now, I am looking for a flat in Almería so as I  start to work next week. I am very nervous so because I will be alone in a city but I think I will get used to it. I have to carry pack a lot of things so as I will be in Almeria for a long time. My parentes and brothers have to come with me because so I will need two cars for all my carring all things. I hope we have a good journey.

14 июня 2014 г.
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