Paulo Brito
Physical education should be required or optional in schools? In my opinion, physical education is one of the most important discipline during the childhood. It must be required in school to better develop students in many areas such as body, mental and social ones. Exercises helps students to guarantee a better performance in all other tasks. Eventhough the students is are in a good shape, exercises may help them to be healthier than a sedentary person. Obviously, only exercises are not enough, it must be followed by a good alimentation oriented by a specialist and also a frequent good nights of sleep. Moreover, physical education may develop a motor intelligence which is directly associated with a body coordination that will help them for dancing, practicing sports and many other social activities. Also, it may help them to get focusing on what they need to do to achieve goals and making fast decisions. In addition, it is a discipline that teaches a better getting-well with friends, respecting the other ones limitations and in the other hand being more competitive facing/front of better sportists. Also, as an education requirement, they must learn from the beginning how to respect the space of someone elses. By the way of conclusion, as students are usually not mature enough to consider those three points I just mentioned above, physical education must be not optional in schools. Some of students do not like to do any kind of exercises because they are not good on it, but they must try as much they can to break these walls.
21 авг. 2015 г., 23:06
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Should Physical Education be required or optional in schools?

In my opinion, Physical Education is one of the most important disciplines during childhood. It must (/It should) be required in school to better develop students in several areas overall; such as physically, mentally and socially.

Exercise helps students achieve a better performance in tasks. Even though the students are in good shape, exercise may help them to be healthier than a sedentary (/an inactive) person. Obviously, exercise alone is not enough, it must be followed by a good alimentation oriented by a specialist { I have underlined this because I am not quite sure what you mean by this. Maybe it is correct but I am not versed on this subject.} and also a frequent good nights of sleep.

Moreover, Physical Education may develop motor intelligence which is directly associated with body coordination. This will help with dancing, practicing sports, and many other social activities. Also, it may help them to get focused on what is needed to achieve goals and making fast decisions.

In addition, it is a discipline that teaches better social interations, respecting the other ones limitations (/setting proper boundaries) and on the other hand being more competitive. Also, if Physical Education is an education requirement, students learn from the beginning (/initially) how to respect the space of someone else.

In conclusion, as students are usually not mature enough to consider these three points, [which were mentioned above] {Honestly, you could add this, but it is not needed.}, physical education must be not optional in schools. Some students do not like any kind of exercise because they are not sportive (/athletic), but they must try to break these walls (/barriers).

22 августа 2015 г.
I'm a teacher and I'm really interested in what you say about physycal education. In Mexico, for example it's necessary for physical education teachers are not only good at sports, but also to be good with their teaching strategies . The focus of physical education in my country, especially in kindergarten, elementary school and high school, is not to train high performance athletes , but kids whose take care of their body with good exercise , healthy diet and good lifestyle. It's really important because Mexico has the first in the world in obesity.
22 августа 2015 г.
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