Reflection on confession of a shopaholic The girl in the green scarf was impressed on my heart.At the begin the girl was a shopaholic and she eagered to get the prefect goods on the shopwindow.In fac

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Reflection on confession of a shopaholic The girl in the green scarf was impressed on my heart.At the begin the girl was a shopaholic and she eagered to get the prefect goods on the shopwindow.In fact,she always did buy the goods that she wanted .But i think what she did was wrong,she purchased the more thing rather than paid off the increasing debts. Maybe its the woman right and nature.Then she lied to a man who she loved.It happened too much things.luckily,she found her conscience and morals, her lover and friend come back to her side.Its a awesome movie for girls.

24 дек. 2015 г., 15:35

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Reflection on confession of a shopaholic

The girl in the green scarf was impressed on my heart(有一点奇怪).At the begining(begin是动词) the girl was a shopaholic and she was eager（eager不是动词，eagered不是单词） to buy everything in the shopwindow(更好一点).In fact,she always bought the goods that she wanted .But i think that (更好一点)what she did was wrong,she purchased more stuff（东西的翻译是things或者stuff） rather than paying(不能给你很好的解释为啥这样更好) off increasing debts. Maybe it‘s（it is women's(all women, 复数) nature.Then she lied to a man who she loved.It happened too much things（不明白你的意思）.luckily,she found her conscience and morals, her lover and friend came back to her side.Its a awesome movie for girls.

25 декабря 2015 г.

Reflection on Confessions of a Shopaholic

The girl in the green scarf was impressed on my heart. At the begining, the girl was a shopaholic and she was eager to get the perfect goods from the shopwindow. In fact, she always bought the goods that she wanted. But I think what she did was wrong. She purchased the more than she could afford rather than paying off the increasing debts. Maybe it's the woman's right and nature. Then she lied to a man whom she loved. Too many things happened but luckily, she found her conscience and morals, her lover and friend came back to her side. It's a awesome movie for girls.