Kaori
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time for me. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it work out just only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my target foreign languages. 5) I bought 10 new German books nowadays. But I want to read my English books first.
4 сент. 2024 г., 11:07
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90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up at about 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some housework and then I can have a little time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but I can only do it once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages. 5) I've recently bought 10 new German books, but I want to read my English books first.
4 сент. 2024 г., 12:17
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up at 6 o'clock weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some housework and then spend some time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it works out just only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my target foreign language. 5) I bought 10 new German books, but I want to read my English books first.
Great job! Just a few small things and it was almost perfect.
5 сент. 2024 г., 2:36
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences please? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up around 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but often I have my dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and have some time for myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it actually happens only once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to learn my targeted foreign languages. 5) I bought ten new German books these days, and I want to read my English books first.
4 сент. 2024 г., 16:18
90 day's training: Day 2 Could you please check my sentences? Thanks in advance. 🐰 1) I usually wake up about 6 o'clock on weekdays. 2) I should go to bed earlier but I often have a dinner around 9 PM. After that I have to do some of our housework and spend a little time by myself. 3) I want to take a nap every day but it works out that way just once or twice a week. 4) I have lots of books and DVDs to help me learn my target foreign languages. 5) I bought 10 new German books recently. But, I want to read my English books first. Your only genuine mistakes are these: #2: "for me" (grammatical, but doesn't sound good. "myself" is needed) #3: "it work out" #5: "nowadays" (Wrong because "nowadays" also includes the future. "Recently" only includes the past.) All my other changes are only suggested improvements. It is not wrong to say "I often have a dinner", though most people would leave out "a". The meaning changes slightly when you use "a". "Weekdays" means the same as "on weekdays". You can say it either way.
4 сент. 2024 г., 14:03
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