Angie
Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fullful his duties at time, but there is something that he often does, he likes to make dumb gimmicks. That kind of stuff makes bother to his sisters which it is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's tight with the sport coach of the neighborhood that's why he can train in the local gym as long as he helps the coach to set in order the gyim stuff at the end od the day trip.
30 ธ.ค. 2024 เวลา 23:03
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Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fulfills his duties on time, but there is something that he often does, he likes to play dumb pranks/tricks. That kind of stuff annoys his sisters which is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's close to the sports coach of the neighborhood , that's why he can train in the local gym as long as he helps the coach to set up the gym stuff at the end of the day trip. Not a bad piece of writing. Hope the corrections help you. What about booking me for 30 minutes soon? You could use some English help I think
31 ธันวาคม 2024
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Robert is an unusual teenager. He never sleeps in, he always wakes up early and fulfills his duties on time. But there is something that he often does: he likes to make dumb gimmicks??. That kind of stuff bothers his sisters, but it is one of his favorite hobbies in the world. He's tight with the neighborhood sports coach, who lets him train in the local gym in exchange for straightening up the gym equipment at the end od the day trip.
I'm pretty sure 'gimmicks' should be a different word, but I don't know what you mean to say.. Also - the sentences about training in the gym don't seem to have anything to do with the previous sentences. Are they supposed to?
31 ธันวาคม 2024
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