1. “Wide spread” → “Widespread”: “Widespread” is one word. 2. “Flying fish have little chance”: This part is clear, but I kept it as is. 3. “The bird has no chance. Now it is a function word.”: This sentence is more cryptic. Without further context, I kept it as it was, though it might need more clarification. 4. “Gold fish” → “Goldfish”: “Goldfish” is one word. 5. “Didn’t Loop” → “Didn’t loop”: “Loop” doesn’t need to be capitalized here. 6. “Accordingly she kept weeping” → “As a result, she kept weeping”: More natural phrasing. 7. “The question struck up as unusual at first” → “The question seemed unusual at first”: “Struck up” doesn’t fit well in this context. 8. “But the more we talked about it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to cool” → “But the more we discussed it with friends, the more we realized that everyone could relate to it”: “Cool” was a bit unclear here, so I substituted it with “it.” 9. “Man is not much beside the Great birds and beasts” → “Man is not much compared to the great birds and beasts”: “Compared to” is the correct phrase. 10. “There is a solid place”: This phrase is still a bit vague. It might need more context. 11. “If he shows any changes”: Kept as is for clarity. 12. “Earnest about renouncing the world”: “Earnest” is used correctly here. 13. “She broke her leg when she played soccer” → “She broke her leg when she was playing soccer”: Correct verb tense for ongoing action. 14. “When do you do the laundry?”: Left this as is—seems to be a simple question. 15. “We become beasts of burden for life”: Kept as is. If you’d like to continue refining or discussing any points, I’d be happy to help! If you want more practice with these kinds of sentences, feel free to book a conversation lesson with me.