I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think be in a rut is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation and products also need inno

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I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think be in a rut is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation and products also need innovation. That's why I like traveling——we can meet many different people, see a lot of scenery and broaden our knowledge. Sometimes, moving out of our comfort zone may be a better choice.

27 ก.พ. 2023 เวลา 15:43

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I prefer to have some changes in my life. I think being stuck doing one thing is boring. The world is so big and full of interesting things, we should try something new. We need innovation. That's why I like traveling——we can meet many different people, see a lot of scenery and broaden our knowledge. Sometimes, moving out of our comfort zone may be a better choice.

This is well written, except when you added the part about products. It doesn't make sense to add this part, but overall good job!

27 กุมภาพันธ์ 2023

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