After five consecutive holidays, now I need to work. Even though I had five consecutive holidays, I still wanna more time to relax. Once I'm rich enough, I would like to do whatever I want every day.

Chris Huang

5 เม.ย. 2023 เวลา 23:07

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After five consecutive days off, I need to work, although I would prefer to keep relaxing. When I am rich, I will do whatever I want.

Your version is grammatically fine, although "wanna" should be reserved for very casual conversation only. (It looks odd to me seeing it in writing!) Just for fun, I made my version as short as possible while still saying the same thing. Hope that helps!

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