RJHoward
Chinese Love Poem (Mei tian wo ai ni) I do not know the chinese characters yet, only pin yin. I wrote this one night, the last night in China, while sitting and having a drink. This is to all the wonderful experience, and all the love I felt in China. Title: Mei tian wo ai ni qian tian wo jian ni zuo tian wo xi huan ni jin tian wo ai ni ming tian wo hui le mei guo he xi ang ni mei tian wo he ni mei tian wo ai ni
11 พ.ค. 2012 เวลา 0:22
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Chinese Love Poem (Mei tian wo ai ni)

I do not know the chinese characters yet, only pin yin. I wrote this one night, the last night in China, while sitting and having a drink. This is to all the wonderful experience, and all the love I felt in China.

Title: Mei tian wo ai ni

qian tian wo jian ni   前天我见你
zuo tian wo xi huan ni    昨天我喜欢你
jin tian wo ai ni               今天我爱你
ming tian wo hui le mei guo hui  xiang ni     明天我回了美国很想你
mei tian wo he ni   每天我和你
mei tian wo ai ni  每天我爱你

 

Simple sentences,  but pure and fresh.   what a  beautiful poem it is ,  come on, Your Chinese is good !

11 พฤษภาคม 2012
xie xie ni, wo zhi dao wo de zhong wen bu hen hao, ke shi, mei tian wo xue xie he shen me shi hou wo hui le zhong guo zai ba yue, jue de/xi wang wo ke yi shuo he ming bai zhong wen Thank you for your comments, very much, I appreciate it
11 พฤษภาคม 2012

sorry, type wrong. 

ming tian wo hui le mei guo hui  xi ang ni .    明天我回了美国会想你

 

 


 

11 พฤษภาคม 2012
Nice,you can express yourself emotion through some easy chinese character .Go on cheering,I think you will have a breaking in this language.
11 พฤษภาคม 2012
The poem is ok but if you consider the grammatical range and lexical resource , maybe you need to work hard on it . haha , anyway i can see you are a beginner in learning chinese, so this is really a good start.
11 พฤษภาคม 2012
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