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I have a lot of work to do Hi! Tomorrow morning I'm not going to work because I'm going to work from home. Lately, we had a lot of clients coming in and out to our workplace and a lot of phone calls so you can't focus on the projects and meet your deadlines. Therefore, tomorrow I will work at home, so I can focus on the deadline I have next Friday. I have to code the entire system of a booking reservation system for flights, so I guess that tomorrow I will have a "funny" day. After lunch I will need to go to my workplace because I have a meeting, but I guess it will not take me too much time, or at least, that is what I hope. On the other hand, I will try to practice my English after lunch and before my meeting. I have an speaking class with a teacher in the school I'm studying. In fact, my english classes have become my "way to disconnect" of my internet projects. If I work hard in the morning, maybe I'll have free time to go to that class. Thank you very much for your corrections!!!
12 มี.ค. 2014 เวลา 21:55
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I have a lot of work to do

Hi!

Tomorrow morning I'm not going to work because I'm going to work from home. Lately, we've had a lot of clients coming in and out of our workplace and a lot of phone calls so you can't focus on the projects and meet your deadlines. Therefore, tomorrow I will work at home, so I can focus on the deadline I have next Friday. I have to code an entire booking reservation system for flights, so I guess that tomorrow I will have a "funny" day. <em>(This sentence wasn't wrong but this sounds more "native")</em>

After lunch I will need to go to my workplace because I have a meeting, but I guess it will not take me too much time, or at least, that is what I hope.

On the other hand, I will try to practice my English after lunch and before my meeting. I have a speaking class with a teacher in the school where I'm studying. In fact, my english classes have become my "way to disconnect" from my internet projects. If I work hard in the morning, maybe I'll have free time to go to that class.

Thank you very much for your corrections!!!

 

Looks great- good luck! (:

13 มีนาคม 2014
Thanks Phil, that's mean I'm improving ;)
13 มีนาคม 2014
I just can't find any mistake in your new entry~
13 มีนาคม 2014
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