ScissorsLuv
Guys, could you please tell me if these short sentences are ok? -There are lots of places in the city where you can buy it -MMJ is the closest place in the city. It had been my favourite place for years, now it's not anymore. -Their sandwiches were the most generous of all, the vegetables were way more fresh than the ones of the other stands ("than the ones of the other stands" doesn't sound really good. I want to make a comparison between the vegetables sold in this stand and the ones sold in the other stands) Colud you please answer before tomorrow? It's really important!
5 พ.ค. 2016 เวลา 19:59
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personally, i'd say "were much fresher"
5 พฤษภาคม 2016
That section doesn't sound so bad to me. I might change it to ...than the ones AT the other stands.
5 พฤษภาคม 2016
They are okay, but I think they have room for improvement. Here's how I would make them sound more natural ( [] - more formal alternative, () - optional). 1. There are lots of [many] places in the city where you can buy it. 2. a) MMJ is the closest place in the city. b) It used to be my favourite place for years, but (it is) not anymore. 3. Their sandwiches were the most generous of all. The vegetables were way more fresh [much fresher] than at the other stands. It is not a good practice to list two independent sentences with a comma between them as you did with 2b) and 3). English is not very permissive of such constructs. I suggest you either connect them with a conjunctive or make them two separate sentences.
5 พฤษภาคม 2016
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