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That was a long time ago. When I walked in the countryside, I found an injured heron that was a child. He was shivering in the rice field. I could pick him up because he was a child. But he was already relatively large. I moved to my car and gave him a ride back seat. He was quite calm and a good baby. I took him and visited my friend. She was so kind nurse and cared for many animals. So she helped to he and Fred of him. Passed a couple of days, he flew to the blue sky.
18 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 11:15
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That was a long time ago. When I was walking in the countryside, I found an injured heron that was a chick. He was shivering in the rice field. I could pick him up because he was a chick. But he was already relatively large. I moved him to my car and gave him a ride on the back seat. He was quite calm and a good chick. I took him to visit my friend. She was such a kind nurse/vet who cared for many animals. So she helped to him. After a couple of days, he flew into the blue sky.
18 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 11:18
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That happened a long time ago. While walking in the countryside, I found an injured heron chick in a rice field. He was shivering and seemed helpless. I was able to pick him up because he was still young, although he was already quite large for a chick. I carried him to my car and placed him gently on the back seat. He was surprisingly calm and behaved like a very good little bird. I took him to visit my friend, who was a kind nurse with experience caring for animals. She generously helped treat him and fed him well. A couple of days later, he had recovered and flew away into the blue sky.
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18 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 18:41
One day a long time ago when I was walking in the countryside, I found an injured heron chick. He was shivering in a rice paddy. I could pick him up as he was only a chick. But already he was surprisingly large. I took him to my car and placed him on the seat. He was a quite calm and well-behaved baby heron. I drove him to visit my friend. She was a kindly nurse, and had cared for many animals before. So she took care of him, and nursed him back to health. Within a few days he was healthy enough to fly again, and so at last he departed for the blue skies.
19 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 8:13
That was a long time ago. While walking in the countryside, I found a young heron that was injured. It was shivering in the rice field. I was able to pick it up because it was still young, though it was already fairly large. I moved to my car and gave it a ride in the back seat. It was quite calm and well-behaved. I took it to visit my friend, a kind nurse who cared for many animals. She helped the heron and took care of it. After a couple of days, it flew off into the blue sky.
19 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 22:39
That/It was a long time ago. I was walking in the countryside when I found an young injured heron. He was shivering in a rice field. I could pick him up because he was very small but he was already relatively large for a young bird. I went back to my car and gave him a ride on my back seat. He was quite calm and a good baby. I took him and visited my friend. She is such kind nurse who cared for many animals that she helped me feed him. Passed a couple of days, he flew back towards the blue sky.
19 ม.ค. 2025 เวลา 10:21
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