Heather
이건 틀린 것 같아요. 먼저 가진 사람들은 행복할 자기 자신을 필요가 있다. 다른 사람의 행복은 내 책임이 아니다.
10 มิ.ย. 2021 เวลา 1:28
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이건 틀린 것 같아요. 먼저 가진 사람들은 행복할 자기 자신을 필요가 있다. 다른 사람의 행복은 내 책임이 아니다.
이것은 틀린 것 같다. 사람들은 자기 자신의 행복을 먼저 찾을 필요가 있다. 다른 사람의 행복은 나의 책임이 아니다.
10 มิถุนายน 2021
이건 틀린 것 같아요. 먼저 가진 사람들은 행복할 자기 자신을 필요가 있다. 다른 사람의 행복은 내 책임이 아니다.
I think this is wrong. First people need to be happy with themselves. The happiness of others is not my responsibility.
That's what I am trying to say.
10 มิถุนายน 2021
이건 틀린 것 같아요. 먼저 사람들은 스스로 행복할 필요가 있어요. 다른 사람의 행복은 제가 책임지지 않아요.
책임지다. I get responsibility for something.
10 มิถุนายน 2021
이건 틀린 것 같아요. 먼저 가진 사람들은 행복할 자기 자신을 필요가 있다. 다른 사람의 행복은 내 책임이 아니다.
If you write the English sentence, it will be easier for Koreans to make corrections.
10 มิถุนายน 2021
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