Hello,every one. Today,it's rainy.I don't want to school‥ But when finish school,I'm going to shopping in Minatomirai. There is a lot of mall and restrant at the place. Howere I have a lttlie mony,so

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Hello,every one. Today,it's rainy.I don't want to school‥ But when finish school,I'm going to shopping in Minatomirai. There is a lot of mall and restrant at the place. Howere I have a lttlie mony,so need save mony. Thanks for reading my post.

23 เม.ย. 2025 เวลา 5:19

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Hello every one. Today it's rainy and I don't want to go to school‥ But after school I'm going to go shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants there. However, I don't have a lot of money, so I need to save Thanks for reading my post.

23 เม.ย. 2025 เวลา 6:57

Hello, everyone. It's rainy today. I don't want to go to school‥. But once my classes are over, I'm going to go shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants there but I only have little money, so I need to save money. Thanks for reading my post.

23 เม.ย. 2025 เวลา 9:32

Hello,every one. Today it's rainy.I don't want to go to school‥ But when I finish school,I'm going shopping in Minatomirai. There are a lot of malls and restaurants there. Howere I have only a little money ,so I need save money. Thanks for reading my post. I hope the corrections help. Well done for trying. Sadly you made lots of spelling errors, so keep working hard on this. Good luck.

23 เม.ย. 2025 เวลา 6:56

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