wendy
Maybe you have seen many people around you didn't like their jobs very much, but can't change anything. They studied really hard as students until they chose their majors without thinking a lot. Most of them never carefully thought about the relation between their future career and the majors they have chosen. Many of them found that they didn't like their majors after entering universities, even if they had the top scores during the National College Entrance Examination. I have heard a excellent student who got a very high score to get to the greatest university in my country, but he didn't like his major. He just wanted to be a doctor, so he decided to learn the medcine after graducating from his university. Meanwhile, some peers have learned the medcine for four years. It sounds really terrible! So, how to plan your career is the most important thing in your life. If you turn your hobby into a career, I think that you definitely like your job. If you like your job, you definitely try your best to do it better without feeling tired. If you do your job well, you will definitely prove yourself. We always hear that hobbies are always the best teachers for everyone!
8 ต.ค. 2024 เวลา 7:50
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Maybe you have seen many people around you who don't like their jobs very much but can't change anything. They studied really hard as students until they chose their majors without putting much thought into. Most of them never thought carefully about the relationship between their future career and the majors chose. Many of them found that they didn't like their majors after entering university, even if they achieved top scores during the National College Entrance Examination. I heard about an excellent student who got a very high score to get to the best university in my country, but he didn't like his major. He just wanted to be a doctor, so he decided to study medicine after graduating from his university. Meanwhile, some of his peers have learned medicine for four years. It sounds really terrible! So, planning your career is the most important thing in your life. If you turn your hobby into a career, I think that you will definitely like your job. If you like your job, you will definitely try your best to do it better without feeling tired. If you do your job well, you will definitely prove yourself. We always hear that (OR "People say that...) hobbies are the best teachers!
Very good. Only a few small errors. Remember first conditional: if + present tense + will...
8 ต.ค. 2024 เวลา 13:38
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