Shea
When I was a child, I always thought my home was far from the city. Because we don’t have many large building there. Until I moved to the suburbs, which is really in countryside, surrounding by field and traditional buildings. I still love to live in the chill place, whether it needs more time for transportation or inconvenient.
11 มี.ค. 2025 เวลา 11:40
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When I was a child, I always thought my home was far from the city, because we don’t have many large buildings (plural) there. Until I moved to the suburbs, which are (plural) really in the countryside, surrounded by fields (plural) and traditional buildings. I still love to live in a chilled place, even if it needs more time for travelling by public transport. Well done Shea. Nice writing. I hope my corrections can help. You need to focus on single v plural. But well done! Teacher Simon
11 มี.ค. 2025 เวลา 12:06
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