My cat is going to be neutered shortly. We were not quite sure if it was the right thing to do, but he started spraying inside the house, to mark his territory, and this smelled very bad. I hope he forgives me for being so brutal. I really hope he comes back home without any serious health problems.

Could someone please check the following sentences? My cat is going to be neutered soon. We were not quite sure if it is a right thing to do, but he started spraying inside the house to mark his territory, which is very smelly.. Cat, please forgive me for being so brutal… Please come back home without any lethal health problems..

Hello Miki. Here are some more suggestions. If the paragraph is describing the concerns of a couple or a family, you could continue with the use of the plural pronouns such as we or us. To clarify the action, the cat is not GOING to be neutered of his own will. It is more accurate to say that you are choosing TO HAVE him neutered. Often, the word LETHAL is associated with deadly things attacking from outside the body like weapons or poisons. The word FATAL is used more to describe diseases or health complications. We have decided to have our cat neutered. Although unsure it was the right thing to do, we know it will prevent him from spraying inside the house. Marking his territory in this way is smelly. We hope he will forgive us for being so brutal and not suffer any fatal effects. I hope these points are useful to you. Regards, Naomi P.S. - I had all three of my cats neutered without any ill effects.