Evelyn
There are many occasions when we confront a dilemma about whether to choose a challenging plan or a practical one. It is undoubtedly that choosing the former one involves risks and is likely to end up achieving nothing. Nevertheless, nothing ventured, nothing gained. In my opinion, I strongly advice that young people should opt for a challenging plan for their future. Firstly, formidable tasks can prompt people to work harder. When we set an ambitious goal, which needs strenuous efforts to achieve, we are more likely to develop an iron-willed determination and dogged perseverance. With such high spirits and a burning desire to achieve, we could follow through with the plan more smoothly despite the challenge. Secondly, it is inevitable that we may encounter failure in the process of tackling challenges. Instead of losing heart and shrinking immediately, we should rise up to the adversity and learn lessons from it. We could find out our shortcomings and rectify it to preventing making the same mistake again. In consequence, improvement will be made. However, we should make plans based on our own reality. Fancy dreams is somehow far from reality and is unlikely to achieve, making our efforts futile. Worse still, the failure may deal an enormous blow to our confidence and even make it hard for us to recover from the setback.
29 Eyl 2023 15:19
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There are many occasions when we confront a dilemma about whether to choose a challenging plan or a practical one. It is undoubtedly that choosing the former involves risks and is likely to end up achieving nothing. Nevertheless, nothing ventured, nothing gained. In my opinion, I strongly advise that young people should opt for a challenging plan for their future. Firstly, formidable tasks can prompt people to work harder. When we set an ambitious goal, which needs strenuous efforts to achieve, we are more likely to develop an iron-willed determination and dogged perseverance. With such high spirits and a burning desire to achieve, we could follow through with the plan more smoothly despite the challenge. Secondly, we may inevitably encounter failure in the process of tackling challenges. Instead of losing heart and shrinking immediately, we should rise to adversity and learn lessons from it. We could find out our shortcomings and rectify them to prevent making the same mistake again. In consequence, improvement will be made. However, we should make plans based on our reality. Fancy dreams are somehow far from reality and are unlikely to be achieved, making our efforts futile. Worse still, the failure may deal an enormous blow to our confidence and even make it hard for us to recover from the setback.
29 Eylül 2023
Davetli
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There are many occasions when we confront a dilemma about choosing a challenging or practical plan. Doubtless, choosing the former involves risks and is likely to achieve nothing. Nevertheless, nothing ventured, nothing gained. In my opinion, I strongly advise that young people should opt for a challenging plan for their future. Firstly, formidable tasks can prompt people to work harder. When we set an ambitious goal that requires strenuous efforts, we are more likely to develop an iron-willed determination and dogged perseverance. With such high spirits and a burning desire to achieve, we could follow the plan more smoothly despite the challenge. Secondly, we may inevitably encounter failure in the process of tackling challenges. Instead of losing heart and shrinking immediately, we should rise up to adversity and learn lessons from it. We could identify and rectify our shortcomings to prevent repeating the same mistake. In consequence, we will make improvements. However, we should make plans based on our reality. Fancy dreams are far from reality and are unlikely to be achieved, making our efforts futile. Worse still, the failure may greatly blow our confidence and even make it hard for us to recover from the setback.
2 Ekim 2023
There are many occasions when we confront a dilemma about whether to choose a challenging plan or a practical one. It is certain that choosing the former one involves risks and is likely to end up achieving nothing. Nevertheless, nothing ventured, nothing gained. I strongly advise young people to opt for a challenging plan for their future. Firstly, formidable tasks can prompt people to work harder. When we set an ambitious goal, which requires strenuous efforts to achieve, we are more likely to develop an iron-willed determination and dogged perseverance. With such high spirits and a burning desire to achieve, we could follow through with the plan more smoothly despite the challenge. Secondly, it is inevitable that we may encounter failure in the process of tackling challenges. Instead of losing heart and shrinking immediately, we should rise above the adversity and learn lessons from it. We could find out our shortcomings and rectify them to preventing making the same mistake again. As a consequence, improvements will be made. However, we should make plans based on our own reality. Fancy dreams are far from reality and are unlikely to be achieved, making our efforts futile. Worse still, the failure may deal an enormous blow to our confidence and even make it hard for us to recover from the setback.
UNDOUBTEDBLY is an adverb, so it can't modify CHOOSING which is a noun (gerund). IN MY OPINION and I ADVISE kind of mean the same thing, so you don't need both. Good job overall. However, from a logical standpoint, CHALLENGING and PRACTICAL arent opposites. A plan could be both. So, you might consider changing PRACTICAL to EASY.
30 Eylül 2023
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