Please correct my mistakes, mainly in grammar and vocabulary. I'm just a Chinese junior school student so it doesn't much matter for me whether the passage looks native (But of course I'm glad you point out these improper or unnatural places). I used some new words I've never learned so I suppose some of the words are used in a wrong way. Please help me replace these words(not turn into very advanced words). Thank U a lot(●'◡'●)!!!!!

Recently, many hot talks have still been seen on Homework App. The argument of these talks was concentrated on whether parents should help out with students’ homework, in which three opinions appeared. They were mainly sorted into an agreeable, opposite, or uncertain attitude.
Unlike many parents naturally think checking students’ homework belongs to teachers’ duty, I consider it little efficiency to let teachers focus too much on easy homework like simply copying texts, which parents can originally finish the check. Meanwhile, they can learn about what attitude their kids take for study. However, the other extreme is also my disagreement that quite a few parents manage all the homework of students, thinking it helps reduce teachers’ pressure. But in fact, it turns out that not knowing how students behave outside class, teachers may fail to infer their real situations on study. These above are why I take a neutral attitude, that the question mentioned at the beginning depends on different people’s concrete situations. The solution is to find a balance how parents and teachers should divide students’ homework.
Further speaking, how families and schools succeed to adapt the new education framework built by the Double Reduction Policy, is really a valuable question to be considered.

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Please correct my mistakes, mainly in grammar and vocabulary. I'm just a Chinese junior school student so it doesn't much matter for me whether the passage looks native (But of course I'm glad you point out these improper or unnatural places). I used some new words I've never learned so I suppose some of  the words are used in a wrong way. Please help me replace these words(not turn into very advanced words). Thank U a lot(●'◡'●)!!!!!

Recently, many hot talks have still been seen on Homework App. The argument of these talks was concentrated on whether parents should help out with students’ homework, in which three opinions appeared. They were mainly sorted into an agreeable, opposite, or uncertain attitude.
Unlike many parents naturally think checking students’ homework belongs to teachers’ duty, I consider it little efficiency to let teachers focus too much on easy homework like simply copying texts, which parents can originally finish the check. Meanwhile, they can learn about what attitude their kids take for study. However, the other extreme is also my disagreement that quite a few parents manage all the homework of students, thinking it helps reduce teachers’ pressure. But in fact, it turns out that not knowing how students behave outside class, teachers may fail to infer their real situations on study. These above are why I take a neutral attitude, that the question mentioned at the beginning depends on different people’s concrete situations. The solution is to find a balance how parents and teachers should divide students’ homework.
Further speaking, how families and schools succeed to adapt the new education framework built by the Double Reduction Policy, is really a valuable question to be considered.

Answer

Bonnie does a good job, but I would make a couple of minor corrections: 
1) Many parents naturally think checking students’ homework IS the teachers’ duty ("checking is the duty," not are, just like "dancing is fun," "playing football is my job" etc)
2. "however I consider it ineffective to let teachers grade easy homework" - since in the original you said "it was little efficiency," I would say "inefficient," not "ineffective." "ineffective" = it does not work. "inefficient" = it works, but slowly
3. what attitudes their students have ABOUT or REGARDING or IN REGARD TO studying, rather than "for" studying
4. "teachers will fail to understand student attitudes for studying" - same as above
5. The solution is to find a balance BETWEEN how parents and teachers should divide students’ homework.

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Recently, many heated talks have been seen on Homework App. The argument of these talks were concentrated on whether parents should help out with students’ homework, in which three opinions appeared. They were mainly sorted into agreeable, opposite, or uncertain attitudes.
Many parents naturally think checking students’ homework are the teachers’ duty, however I consider it ineffective to let teachers grade easy homework where the students are copying texts. Parents can easily check this type of homework. Instead, teachers can learn about what attitudes their students have for studying. I also disagree with the other extreme that parents should manage all the homework of students to help reduce pressure on the teachers. I think that not knowing how students behave outside of class, teachers will fail to understand student attitudes for studying. These reasons above are why I take a neutral attitude. The question mentioned at the beginning depends on different people’s specific situations. The solution is to find a balance on how parents and teachers should divide students’ homework.
How will families and schools successfully adapt the new education framework built by the Double Reduction Policy is really a valuable question to be considered.