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Fashion trends are difficult to follow, should we pursue it ? Here is a article I wrote for IELTS writing ,hope you help me ,give me some suggestions ,thanks ! In contemporary society ,stylish trends of clothes are increasingly hard to follow ,and it is generally believed that advertising reasons involved ,then some individuals claim that we should wear outfits by our own preference ,instead of following the trends ,which I cannot agree more . At status quo ,we can reach all kinds of information about the latest clothing trend ,through the media ,but most of them are advertisement ,whose aim is explicit clear ,thereby persuading our people to spend money on their pricy outfits .They have utilized the top movie stars ,even celebrities to sway our individuals’ mind ,influencing our taste of clothes gradually .Trying to set their outfits style as a sign of representing “a sweeping trend ”,implying if people not following ,they will be outdated .As a consequence ,a multitude of individuals spend a large number of proportion of money buying luxurious outfits because of advertising ,which is not really necessary for them. Furthermore ,people who always catch the trend are starting to forget what really make themselves distinct ,or unique ,just being awash with the latest trend ,for the sake of being good-looking .Indeed, they are wrong .What makes us distinguish from others is our unique characters, because everyone is different, being reflected to our taste of clothing, we are the one who really knows that kinds of clothes really suits ourselves, and matched our characters .We Shall Overcome insist on our preference rather than being influenced by the media ,which will emphasize our personality .And surely more economical . Indeed ,following trend does not mean bad ,are those gorgeous clothes on models from luxurious famous brands are really masterpieces ,being filled with inspirations from thousands of people .And following the fashion can make you appear more modern .But personally ,I believe we should not follow the fashion trend mechanically ,spending a fortune on that .we really ought to set up our own style . In conclusion ,following the fashion trend should not be condemned ,but following it indiscriminately should be criticized .We should form our own style ,show our unique personality which is our ultimate goal . that’s the requirement of the topic Fashion trends are difficult to follow those days and it is widely believed that they prim
24 Kas 2011 14:37
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New versions of Apple iPad iPod are of this ilk - trends artificially created to generate turnover. Your title should be plural '.... trends .... should we follow THEM?
7 Haziran 2013

Fashion trends are difficult to follow, should we pursue it ?

In contemporary society ,stylish trends of clothes are increasingly hard to follow ,and it is generally believed that advertising reasons are involved .then Now,some individuals claim that we should wear outfits by according to our own preference ,instead of following the trends ,with which I cannot agree more .

At status quo Currently ,we can reach all kinds of information about the latest clothing trend ,through the media ,but most of them are advertisement. whose Their aim is explicit clear ,thereby persuading our people to spend money on their pricy outfits .They have utilized the top movie stars ,even and celebrities to sway our individuals’ minds  ,gradually influencing our taste of  in clothes gradually .Trying to set their outfits styles as a sign of representing “a sweeping trend ”,implying if people do not following ,they will be outdated .As a consequence ,a multitude of individuals spend a large number of proportion of a great deal deal of money buying luxurious outfits because of advertising ,which is even though it is not really necessary for them.

Furthermore ,people who are always catch the trend trendy are starting to forget what really make themselves distinct ,or unique .just being awash Instead they are catch up with the latest trend ,for the sake of being good-looking .IndeedHowever , they are wrong .What makes us distinguish distinguishable from others is our unique characters, because everyone is different, This is being reflected to in our taste of in clothing, we are the ones who really knows that kinds of clothes really suits ourselves, and matched our characters .We Shall  insist on our preference rather than being influenced by the media ,which will emphasize our personality .And surely more economical .

Indeed ,following trend does not mean is not bad ,are Those gorgeous clothes on models from luxurious, famous brands on models are really masterpieces ,being filled with inspirations from thousands of people .And Additionally , following the fashion can make you appear more modern .But personally ,I believe we should not follow the fashion trend mechanically ,spending a fortune on that it .We really ought to set up our own style .

In conclusion ,following the fashion trend should not be condemned ,but following it indiscriminately should be criticized .We should form our own style  and show our unique personality, which is our ultimate goal .


28 Kasım 2011
that’s the requirement of the topic Fashion trends are difficult to follow those days and it is widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes . Some people believe that we should not follow them and that we should dress in what we like . To chat extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
27 Kasım 2011
By coincidence, your words remind me of the backpack I bought Monday. Now I wish I hadn't bought it. I bought it partly because it was trendy. The backpack, alone, is heavy without anything in it because of its good construction. I really don't need something constructed to withstand rigorous mountain trail hikes, etc., and being dragged along the forest floor by a bear (joking here to make a point). Hopefully, I can return it to the store and get my money back.
24 Kasım 2011
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