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A room without books is like a house without windows(an urgent essay) This is my speech next week,I want to know whether it has any mietakes or not.The topic is title. Good afternoom,ladies and gentlemen.Have you think about if there is none of books,what's happened?It's hard to imagine,right? As today's speech theme,book plays special role in our life.If life is a box of chocolate,book will be the sweetest one.Why I say that?Because book is like a magical window that you can get whatever you want to.You'll understand what's the sadnessand happiness from it;you'll know how to solve the problems from it;you'll get what's the meaning of life from it.So,on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. G.W.Curtis used to say"Books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom".Bacon also say"Histories make men wise,poets witty,the mathematic subtle,natural philosophy deep,moral grave,logic and rhetoric able to contend.Their words are the best proof. Without books,we can't know the Earth is round,without books,we can't know how to be a polite man,without books,we can't know what a nice world we have when we stay in.It is conceivable that book plays an important role in our life. Finally,I want to say,please read read read and read,if you want your life shinning all the time.
24 Mar 2013 06:51
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A room without books is like a house without windows(an urgent essay)
This is my speech for next week. I want to know whether it has any mistakes or not. The topic is title. 


Good afternoon, Ladies and Gentlemen. Have you ever thought think about what it would be like if there were is no none of books? What would happen?  It's hard to imagine, right?

As today's speech theme The theme of today's speech is book play a special role in our lives life. If life were is a box of chocolates, books would will be the sweetest one. Why do I say that? Because books are is like a magical window that allow you can to get whatever you want to. From books, you can understand what the sadness is from and happiness from it. You can learn know how to solve the problems from ityou'll get what's and discover the meaning of life from it. So, on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge we receive from books. 

G.W.Curtis used to say, "Books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom". Francis Bacon once said also say "Histories make men wise, poets witty, the mathematic subtle, natural philosophy deep, moral grave, logic and rhetoric able to contend". Their words ring true are the best proof.

Without books how would scientific facts spread? Without books how would we have known the Earth is round?  Without books how would far-off places become known to so many? Without books how would we know what a nice world we live in?  It is definitely conceivable that book plays an important role in our life.

Finally, I want to say, "Please read, read, read and read if you want your life to shine all the time!".


<em>Great speech!  I will start reading more.</em>
<em>>I changed the second to last paragraph a bit to make it flow more. 
>This sentence "From books, you can understand what sadness is from and happiness." can also be "From books, you can understand sadness and happiness." I wasn't sure which one you wanted to say. </em>

24 Mart 2013

A room without books is like a house without windows(an urgent essay)

This is my speech next week,I want to know whether it has any mietakes or not.The topic is title.
Good afternoon,ladies and gentlemen. Have you think thought about what would happen if there were is none of  no bookswhat's happened? It's hard to imagine, right?


As Today's speech theme is how books plays a special role in our life lives. If life is a box of chocolates, a book will be the sweetest one. Why do I say that? Because, a book is like a magical window that where you can get whatever you want to. You'll understand what's the sadness and happiness from it; you'll know how to solve the problems from it; you'll get what's the meaning of life from it. So, on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.


G.W. Curtis used to say, "Books are the ever-burning lamps of accumulated wisdom". Bacon also said, "Histories make men wise; poets, witty; the mathematics, subtle; natural philosophy, deep; moral, grave; logic and rhetoric, able to contend." Their words are the best proof.


Without books, we wouldn't can't know the Earth is round. Without books, we wouldn't can't know how to be a polite man. Without books, we wouldn't can't know what a nice world we live in have when we stay in. It is conceivable that books plays an important role in our life.
Finally, I want to say, please read read read and read, if you want your life shinning to shine all the time.

24 Mart 2013
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