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People are never satisfied with what they have. One more essay.

Personally speaking, I agree with this the statement that people are never satisfied with what they have. In my opinion, it is obviously this has been the case since people appeared on the earth. In addition we can apply religion statement based on history about exile people from paradise. Some religious thought suggests that this relates to our exile from paradise. Before this moment people were happy without desires, but now people follow to their own desires, and they never will can never be happy, according to religious context these religions.

First of all [this is not wrong, but since this <em>isn't</em> the first thing you've said, you're better off without it], I think the main goals goal of our existence are is to be happy. However, people usually do not usually comprehend how to get achieve this condition. They usually [you used "usually" in the last sentence and don't need it again] think that happiness lies somewhere ahead, but happiness is here and now [1]. This condition does not relate with level of to our achievements in life, for example, or with the amount of money that we have. A homeless people person can be happy, while a similar like billionaire or vice versa can be unhappy. Thus, we have to comprehend at first what can makes us happy.

The simplest thing that exists in the modern world is money. A lot of people think that money can make us happy. Sometimes it is fairy this is fair, because we can it allows us to buy significant amounts of interesting things, such as a nice car, a beautiful house, or a upscale fashionable dress. In addition, we can buy not only certain things, but also a perfect education, ["perfect" is a bit strong to describe something like education. Maybe "...an excellent education"] musical instruments, pieces of art [or just "art"] etc. Therefore, money <em>can</em> make us happy, without a doubt.

However, usually people do are not satisfied with this certain the amount of money that they have today. They want more and more. This leads them ahead, They feel they're getting ahead in life, but on the other hand they actually are becoming increasingly dissatisfied and unhappy. So, what <em>should</em> we do to be happy finally? I think we have to listen to our hearts and do not rush to get earn a lot of money or something like that. We have to be satisfied with what we have now, because, I am sure, we are already happy now. It does not matter how much money or other good things we have.

[1] - "...whereas happiness is actually found in the here and now" would be a more idiomatic way to phrase it. To live "in the here and now" means to concentrate only on the present, and not to worry about the past or the future.