Let´s go to the beach

Last weekend my family and I went to the beach.
We drove for about two hours, the day was amazing! It was unny and hot.
It´s summer in Brazil and going to the beach is a traditional trip here.
In my region, we have a lot of beaches. If you drive two hours, you can visit twelve different beaches.
My mother ate fish.  She and I love fish and seafood, but fish isn’t my favorite. I love shrimp!   I like shellfish, oysters, crab, and fish.
The water was delicious, a lot of waves. I love to swim! The beach was crowded.  I waited in a long line to buy a crepe. Do you know what a crepe is? They are a kind of  stuffed pancake. Normally you can choose your filling.
I chose chocolate and it was very good. I enjoyed the beach! I love summer!

Let´s go to the beach

Last weekend my family and I went to the beach.
We drove about two hours, the day was amazing! It was Sunny and Hot.
It´s summer in Brazil and going to the beach is traditional practice here.
In my region, we have a lot of beaches. If you drive two hours, you can stay in twelve different beaches
My mother ate fish, she loves fish and seafood. Me too. But fish isn’t my favorite. I love shrimp! And I like shellfish, oyster, crab and fish.
The water was delicious, a lot of waves. I love to swim! The beach was crowded and I waited a lot for buy a crepe. Do you like crepes?/have you tried crepes? They are a kind of pancake and you can choose your filling.
I chose chocolate and it was very good. I enjoyed the beach! I love summer!

note: you have mixed up the tenses so this passage does not read like it happened in the past or in the present. Sometimes it is in the present and sometimes in the past.  I have only corrected mistakes within each sentence.