KAROL V.
MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IS MY MOTHER Her name is Carmenza Gomez, was born in Quipile in 1966. Her parents divorced when she was a child. When she was 15 years old she left home. She went to the city of Bogota, met my father. She married my father and had two children. 17 years after they divorced and my mother was in charge of my brother and me. She bought a house in Bosa after divorce.She is very picky about cleanliness . She works in a construction company, she is happy to work there. She is my example, is noble, generous and hardworking. She gets up at 5:30 am and goes to work at 9:00 am . She usually works from Sunday to Sunday. She gets so tired I do not watch television. She does not like animals. She likes the plant. She does not like sweets much prefer to eat fruits and vegetables My mother is very judicious her very supportive and always when I need it so she is my favorite character. Como escribo en ingles ella tiene muchas plantas en el patio de la casa. Como hago para conectar oraciones y no utilizar tanto SHE.
10 Haz 2015 16:42
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MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IS MY MOTHER

Her name is Carmenza Gomez, she was born in Quipile in 1966. Her parents divorced when she was a child. When she was 15 years old she left home.
She went to the city of Bogota and met my father.

She married my father and had two children. 17 years after later they divorced and my mother was in charge of my brother and me. She bought a house in Bosa after divorce.She is very picky about cleanliness .

She works in a construction company, she is happy to work there. She is my example, she is noble, generous and hardworking. She gets up at 5:30 am and goes to work at 9:00 am . She usually works from Sunday to Sunday. She gets so tired I do not she does not watch television.

She does not like animals. She likes the plants. She does not like sweets much, but prefers to eat fruits and vegetables

My mother is very judicious her and very supportive and always there for me when I need it her so she is my favorite character.


Como escribo en ingles ella tiene muchas plantas en el patio de la casa. "She has many plants in the garden (or yard) at her house."

Como hago para conectar oraciones y no utilizar tanto SHE.  You can make the sentences longer with contrasts-examples below:

"She likes plants, but not not animals. She likes to eat fruits and vegaetables, but not sweets."

Your mom sounds like a really strong woman!

10 Haziran 2015
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