Eunbin
Practice 1. Have you ever worked for a charity? Yes, I have. I worked for the local child center to teach children who weren't able to get a proper education. 2. How long did you work there? I worked there for 6 months. I usually taught them korean and math. We enjoyed cooking every Thursday and went to the park or schoolyard at times when the weather was nice . 3. Was it a well run charity? Pretty well. The director and teachers who worked there sincerely loved their children and tried to lead them onto the right path. 4. Did you enjoy this work? Yes, I did. The more we gave them our love and affection, the more they became a better person. They were lovely human beings. 5. Do you think having large charity organizations is a good idea? I agree with it to some extent. It is not easy to be supported if the organization is small. On the contrary, if it's big and well-known, they could be supported from more people besides government.
31 Ağu 2018 08:52
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Practice

1. Have you ever worked for a charity?
Yes, I have. I worked for the a local child center to teach children who weren't able to get a proper education.

2. How long did you work there?
I worked there for 6 months. I usually would teach taught  them Korean and Math. We enjoyed cooking every Thursday and went to the park or schoolyard at times when the weather was nice.

3. Was it a well run charity?
It was run pretty well. The director and teachers who worked there sincerely loved their children and tried to lead them onto the right path.

4. Did you enjoy this work?
Yes, I did. The more we gave them our love and affection, the more they became a better person. They were lovely children human beings.

5. Do you think having large charity organizations is a good idea?
I agree with it to some extent. It is not easy to be supported if the organization is small. On the contrary, if it's big and well-known, they could be supported from more people besides government.

Well done! This was well written. I've made some changes so it sounds better.

31 Ağustos 2018
I really like the way you've written this. It's incredibly natural sounding as if you've written in the way that you speak. Also it sounds like you did some interesting work. Nice job, keep it up! :)
31 Ağustos 2018
Hi Eunbin. I think volunteer organizations are very important and have dedicated many hours to them. I am grateful that I have had a lot of blessings in my life and I feel compelled to give my time to help people who have been less fortunate. You made a difference in those children's lives and society will be better for it.
31 Ağustos 2018
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