wendy
This is a serious topic worth talking about ,because most people aroud us look on their phone wherever and whenever. When we walk outside, everyone do the same move that put their heads down on their their phones. When you get close to them, you usually find them are attracted by a variety of videos from some social media apps. I even saw someone wtached videos while eating hot pot, and picked up tissues as food, then ate it. As for me, I really want to put down my phone and do something interesting, but I can't help myself to open those apps and watch videos one by one until I feel tired and my mind goes blank. Everyone becomes sensitive and lose interest on social. Even though we know that we have some important things to do , we still spend time on watching videos first. We really want to change our life without being controlled by the videos, but we take our phones to the bathroom after opening our eyes in every morning. We feel sad and don't know what our lives will be changed due to apps. So, the must-have apps are really must-have? They may be mustn't- have apps. How about you? my friends.
9 Eki 2024 07:52
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This is a serious topic worth talking about because most people around us look on their phone wherever and whenever. When we walk outside, everyone is doing the same - staring down at their phones. When you take a closer look, you usually find that they are attracted by a variety of videos from some social media apps. I even saw someone watching videos while eating hot pot, picking up tissues as food(?), then eating it. As for me, I really want to put down my phone and do something interesting but I can't help opening those apps and watching videos one by one until I feel tired and my mind goes blank. Everyone is becoming sensitive and losing interest on social(?). Even though we know that we have some important things to do, we still spend time watching videos first. We really want to change our life without being controlled by the videos, but we take our phones to the bathroom after opening our eyes in every morning. We feel sad and don't know how our lives will change due to apps. So, are the must-have apps really must-have? They may be mustn't- have apps. How about you, my friends?
Very good but there are places you need to use the gerund instead of the past form. I also wrote (?) at two sentences because I'm not sure what you mean. If you can explain, maybe I can offer suggestions. Also, no spaces before commas.
9 Eki 2024 08:22
This is a serious topic worth talking about because most people around us look at their phones wherever and whenever. When we walk outside, everyone does the same thing, they immediately start looking at their phones. When you get close to them, you usually find they are attracted by a variety of videos from some social media apps. I even saw someone who was watching videos while eating hot pot, and picked up a serviette instead of food and ate it. I really want to put down my phone and do something interesting, but I can't help myself from opening those apps and watching videos one after another until I feel tired and my mind goes blank. Everyone becomes sensitive and loses interest . Even though we know that we have some important things to do , we still spend time watching videos first. We really ought to change our lives without being controlled by videos, but we take our phones to the bathroom after opening our eyes every morning. We feel sad and don't know what our lives will be without apps. So, are the must-have apps really must-have? They may be mustn't- have apps. How about you, what do you think my friends?
9 Eki 2024 14:58
This is a serious topic worth talking about ,because most people around us look on their phone wherever and whenever. When we walk outside, everyone do the same move that put their heads down on their phones. When you get close to them, you usually find them attracted by a variety of videos from some social media apps. I even saw someone watched videos while eating a hot pot, and picked up tissues as food, then ate it. As for me, I really want to put down my phone and do something interesting, but I can't help myself to open those apps and watch videos one by one until I feel tired and my mind goes blank. Everyone becomes sensitive and lose interest on social. Even though we know that we have some important things to do , we still spend time on watching videos first. We really want to change our life without being controlled by the videos, but we take our phones to the bathroom after opening our eyes every morning. We feel sad and don't know what our lives will be changed due to apps. So, the must-have apps are really must-have? They may be mustn't- have apps. How about you? my friends.
9 Eki 2024 14:27
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