Polly
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
13 Thg 11 2020 17:31
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My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. Volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team sport. Also, I like to learn languages: English and Chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Just a few minor changes to make it flow more smoothly. Your message was very understandable.
13 tháng 11 năm 2020
My favorite hobby is playing volleyball. The volleyball develops speed and strength. I enjoy it because it is a team play. Also, I learn languages : english and chinese. I want to speak them perfectly. My hobbies are very interesting for me.
Good text
13 tháng 11 năm 2020
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