Saddam Hussain
Yes, it is really safe to travel in most of the areas of Pakistan. In some countries, the media shows the bad side of Pakistan, due to which people in those countries consider us terrorists and bad people, but that is not true we are an hospitable nation.
18 Thg 07 2023 17:44
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Hi Saddam. Thanks for reaching out to me. Please take a look at my corrections: "Indeed, traveling in the majority of areas within Pakistan is considered safe. Unfortunately, certain countries' media outlets tend to portray a negative image of Pakistan, leading people in those nations to perceive us as terrorists or unfavorable individuals. However, this perception is far from accurate, as we take pride in our hospitable nature as a nation." I hope it helps
24 tháng 7 năm 2023
Yes, it is really safe to travel in most areas of Pakistan. In some countries, the media shows the bad side of Pakistan, due to which people in those countries consider us terrorists and bad people, but that is not true. We are a hospitable nation.
Hello Saddam, great job overall, but there were a few minor things that I changed. For example, you should say "a hospitable nation" not "an" because you pronounce the H sound in that word, so it doesn't start with a vowel. On the other hand, we say "an hour" because the H is silent in that case. I hope that helps.
18 tháng 7 năm 2023
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