Thank you, my dear teacher!

Today, I really want to show my <strike>grateful</strike> gratitude to my English teacher, Kathy Lee, who cared <strike>about</strike> for me so much. If she hadn't helped me so much <strike>help</strike> in the course, I <strike>was</strike> would still have been the same person who hated to learn English. Owing to her, I see the hope in English major. She <strike>is</strike> was the first one, and the only one teacher in the college to <strike>take</strike> pay so much attention to me and offered so <strike>many</strike> much help. <strike>For</strike> With her help I have turned into an active student with a positive attitude from a person who always kept slienct in the class  . Thanks to her<strike> illustration</strike> innovative teaching metods， I found the right way that was best fit for me to learn (English) well. She is one of the most important guides in my life. I think I am so lucky to meet such a good teacher. What she had done for me makes me realize that a quality teacher is the person who not only knows how to impart knowledge to the students but also how to care for the students' psycological issues which often lead to bad performance in their study and then gives them an appropriate guidance to overcome the issue.
Having followed her advices, I came to realize what had happened to me, what I needed to do at first, what attitude I should have <strike>had</strike>  adopted towards my study, and what the best method was for me to overcome the difficulties.
Had it not been for her, I would still have been a failure in my study as well as in my life.
I can't tell what will happen in the future and whether I can <strike>solve</strike> overcome the psycological barrier in the process of learning English, but at least, I can have a good attitude towards learning, and get some help from the people who face the similar problems <strike>to</strike> like me.


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T<em>here is a bit of "tense" conflict in your post as well. I have corrected it with a perception that you have written about something which is already past. If not, plz make necessary changes in "tense".</em>

suggestions:
1. Be careful about CAPITAL letters. Don't ignore it while writing. Hope you know where to use it.
2. Small sentences, short expressions, simple grammar, appropriate yet easy (everyday) words are the fashion of modern English.
3. Avoid multi-clausal and multi-phrasal sentences (like the blue one .... sooooo long!!!). Better to make another expression for  the underlined part.
4. Break such long ideas into multiple short yet more foreceful expressions
5. If you can do it (with a little practice), your ability to communicate in Oral English will become better and better... and you will start enjoying speaking in English too.

Stay positive and surge ahead!! ..... All the best!!