Breakfast at Tiffany's, one of my favourite films

Breakfast at Tiffany's tells the story of a young New Yorker girl who lives an easy and apparently happy life. She does weird things like having a coffee and a cake looking at Tiffany's shop windows, playing guitar by the window of her apartment, and setting up parties. One day, a not very successful writer moves into her building and they become friends and maybe or possibly something more. (I changed this as it is not good to use "and" twice in the same sentence)

Reviewers have said that this is a perfect comedy and that it defines perfectly defines the magic of cinema. The main actors, Audrey Hepburn and George Peppard made give an almost perfect performances, particularly Audrey who was as charming as always. ever. (because there are two people you need to say "performances")

The end of the film is really bittersweet because when she realizes that she has been living in a bubble, out of the actual away from the real world. and then The film finishes when they kiss each other to seal their love.

Well done Txete!  A well written review of your favorite film with just a few minor corrections required.

Keep up your good work and best wishes for your birthday tomorrow!

Breakfast at Tiffany's, one of my favourite films

Breakfast at Tiffany's tells the story of a young New Yorker (always capitalize place names) girl who lives an easy and apparently happy life. She does weird things like having a coffee and a cake looking at Tiffany's shop windows, playing guitar by the window of her apartment, and setting up parties (or "planning parties"). One day, a not very successful writer moves to her building, and they become friends and maybe something more.

Reviewers have said that this is a perfect comedy, and that it perfectly defines  the magic of cinema. The main actors, Audrey Hepburn and George Peppard made an almost perfect performance, particularly Audrey who was as charming as always. <em>(This sentence is not incorrect, but would most like be written "The performances of Audrey Hepburn and George Peppard were almost perfect, particularly Audrey who was as charming as always." The phrase "made a performance" is not really used in English.)</em>

The end of the film is really bittersweet, because she realises that she has been living in a bubble, out of the actual world, and then they kiss each other to seal their love.

<em>Very well written!  Only a few mistakes with word order and verb tense.</em>