Today I will would like to talk about  Korean traditional clothing, the clothes ‘Hanbok’ 

The Hanbok originated descended from the clothing of a northern nomadic ethnic group. It continued to by the ancient countries of Korea, Goryeo, Baekje and Silla. It is consists of traditional Korean an overcoat_(durumagi), a jacket(jeogori), pants(baji) and a skirt(chima). The Hanbok has distinguishing feature from the other also had influenced the fashion style of nearby countries where are near Korea, such as China and Japan. Its beauty is known as well that the harmonious balance of straight and mild slight curves of the costume is matched well and is in harmony. And it shows and the various colors and patterns. Since It isn’t tight, it doesn’t show your body shape, so if you are a bit fat, you could see beautifully, and it is designed easy to move. As it is not body hugging, unflattering body fat will not show.  It is also designed for easy movement of the wearer.

Recently, Nowadays, Koreans people wear the Hanbok on special occasionsally. Only they wear it when like their weddings ceremony and two biggest holidays in Korea like Chuseok, the Autumn Harvest Evening, something like Thanksgiving  (it is same as Thanks giving day) and Seol (Korean Lunar New Year’s day). Although it is easy to move about in it cooling in summer and warm in winter, usually western style clothing is worn for daily life.  and has many benefit like ventilation or heat reservance, modern society people prefer to wear daily clothes which most of world wide people wear.
Even if these days it is hard to find to wear Hanbok, you can still try it at Korea culture center or tourist spot where you can experience traditional Korean culture. It is difficult to look for a Hanbok but you can find them easily in cultural centers or in touristy places for those wanting to experience traditional Korean culture.

Lately, in korea, there is a trend that some people wear modernized the Hanbok is modernize to suit today's need. It isn’t won't be fancy but easy to wear and made same convenient as modern clothing. At the conclusion, I do hope we Koreans preserve our traditional culture and wish we could have chances find more occasions to wear the Hanbok more than now.

I am so sad because regret that I couldn’t cannot explain our my traditions culture and the Hanbok betterexactly. I did it as much as all I could even though  but I know it isn’t enough not much. Just, I hope the people just hope those who read my essay could this to gain a little more have a chance to know about Korean culture. Thanks you for reading my note. Correction is always welcome.

Too bad I don't know Korean to precisely correct this but enough from the context :)  I could be wrong in my assumptions.

Today I will talk about Korean traditional clothes, Hanbok.

Today I will talk about Korean traditional clothes, ‘Hanbok’

Hanbok originated from Northern nomadic ethnic groups. It continued to in the ancient countries of Korean kingdoms of Goryeo, Baekje, and Silla. It is consisted of the traditional Korean overcoat (durumagi), jacket (jeogori), pants (baji), and skirt (chima). Hanbok has distinguishing features from the other countries where are near Korea like China and Japan. Its beauty is known as well that for incorporating straight lines and mild curves is that are matched well in harmony. And it shows They are made in various colors and patterns. Since it isn’t tight, it doesn’t show your body shape; so if you are a bit fat, you could are seen beautifully, and it is designed for easy movement.

Recently, Korean people wear Hanbok occassionally. Only They only wear it them when it's their wedding ceremony and two of the biggest holidays in Korea like Chusuk (it is the same as Thanksgiving Day) and Seol (Lunar New Year’s Day). Although it is they are easy to move around in and has many benefits like ventilation or heat reservance, modern society day people prefer to wear daily clothes which most people of world wide people wear.
Even if these days it is hard to find places to wear Hanbok these days, you can still try it them at a Korean Culture Center or tourist spots where you can experience traditional Korean culture.

Lately, in Korea, there is a trend that of some people wearing modernized Hanbok. It isn’t They aren't fancy, but easy to wear and made the same as modern clothes.
At the In conclusion, I hope we Koreans preserve our traditional culture and wish we could have more chances to wear Hanboks.

I am so sad because I couldn’t explain our traditional culture and Hanbok exactly. I did it as much well as I could, but I know it isn’t enough. Just, I just hope that the people who read my essay could will have a chance to know about Korean culture. Thank you for reading my note. Correction is always welcomed.