Politicians and film stars need privacy
FCE
Nowadays there' is no limit to gossip and speculation, in fact u. Unfortunately a , in fact, a
lot of well -known figures don't haven't control of their own privacy anymore.
However, notoriety and fame help people to be easily noticed and to stand out
from the crowd. Therefore in tho these days because of the massive importance of social
networks such as twitter, facebook .. Those who belongs to the start system doesn't
need a photographer to show off histheir person anymore but they can do it hi
themselfves by uploading intimate shoots on instagram.
On the other hand, this doesn't justify the extreme behaviour of some pedant
journalists. What we all deserve in our lives is reciprocal respect and
politeness, it's the same for renowned people thatpeople in the public eye who, in several cases ,
can't barelyeven eat without being continuously phographed though.
To sum up, the borderline between violation and curiosity ought to be always
clear in order not to jeopardise other people's freedom.
Hello Penelope,
This is a nice FCE writing, it is correctly laid out and addresses both sides of
the argument. It flows well with quite good use of connectors. I had a problem
with one word in blue, I am not sure what you are trying to say unless you mean
'the smart set'.
Take care with 'have', if it is being used as a main verb then it needs to be
negated with 'do' the same as other verbs. It is only when it is an auxiliary
such as in the present perfect that have gets negated itself.
Hope this helps
Bob
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