Dyi, That was pretty good. I can see that you have highlighted the word 'butterflys' and I think that this word needs a little more practice. I minor point, but try not to miss the 's' sound off the end of the word 'months'.

Really great job! I noticed a couple of things: - make sure every word of “in it at all” and “at the same time” are clear (these sounded almost like “in at all” and “at same time” to me) - work on the ending “S” of “months” - for “butterflies,” the emphasis is only on the first syllable But these are all really minor — good luck with your teacher!

Very good read! Kudos to you! Keep on your good job!!!