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There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very
delicious. There were many times，that I wanted to buy half kilo of grapes，but I
didn't.
This saturday，I bought half kilo of this kind of grapes.
Now I am eating it，while playing phone games.
I like this kind of grape，And I like the good time it gives to me.
2024年11月17日 13:28
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There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very
delicious. There were many times that I wanted to buy half a kilo of these grapes，but I didn't. This saturday，I bought half a kilo of it. Now I am eating
it，while playing games on my phone. I like this kind of grape，And I like the good feeling it gives me/makes me feel.
No comma before "that". And you can use "it" or "these grapes" instead of repeating "this kind of grapes". The sentence holds the same meaning in that case 💐
2024年11月17日 13:53
There is a kind of green grape in China. It is very expensive，but it is very
delicious. There were many times that I wanted to buy half a kilo of grapes，but I
didn't. This saturday，I bought half a kilo of these kind of grapes. Now I am eating
them while playing phone games. I like this kind of grape，And I like the good time/feeling
it gives to me.
2024年11月17日 13:40
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