kake
Most schools include physical education as part of their school program. Why is physical education Important? Should physical education classes be compulsory or optional? ↓Please correct following my answer Physical education(P.E.) is compulsory at almost all schools. This essay will discuss the reason why P.E. is important and why I think all students should take P.E. class. P.E. is crucial for young students because they are in a process to educate their body. Young people's body is vital, so they can easily regulate their health and build muscles. However, a lot of modern children are addicted to playing video games or surfing the internet. In retrospect, when I was in elementary school, we gathered at the park near the school and played video games together, not any sports. Consequently, children now have less opportunity to play actively than older tier. Compulsory physical education might be just one hour exercise a week, but it can reduce the effect of video games and internet. To sum up, voluntary exercise is absolutely the best for children's nurture, but it is ridiculous to deprive children's choice in their free time off. However youth is precious for their body in the long run, students should exercise in P.E. class.
28 oct. 2024 05:10
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Most schools include physical education as part of their school program. Why is physical education Important? Should physical education classes be compulsory or optional? ↓Please correct following my answer Physical education(P.E.) is compulsory at almost all schools. This essay will discuss the reason why P.E. is important and why I think all students should take P.E. class. P.E. is crucial for young students because they are in a process to educate their body. Young peoples’ bodies are vital, so they can easily regulate their health and build muscles. However, a lot of modern children are addicted to playing video games or surfing the internet. In retrospect, when I was in elementary school, we gathered at the park near the school and played video games together, not/rather than any sports. Consequently, children now have less opportunity to play actively than older/previous generations. Compulsory physical education might be just one hour of (one hour’s exercuse) exercise a week, but it can reduce the effect of video games and the internet. To sum up, voluntary exercise is absolutely the best for children's growth/development nurture, but it is ridiculous to deprive children of choice in their free time off. However youth is precious for their body in the long run, students should exercise in P.E. class.
Well done Kake. Very nice writing. Only a few changes. Young person = singular, young people = plural. I think generation is a nicer word here than tier, and development a better word than nuture. You deprive of.
28 oct. 2024 07:57
Physical education(P.E.) is compulsory at almost all schools. This essay will discuss the reasons why P.E. is important and why I think all students should take P.E. class. P.E. is crucial for young students because they are in at a crucial stage of their development. Young people's bodies are vital, it is important to regulate their health and build muscles. However, a lot of modern children are addicted to playing video games or surfing the internet. In retrospect, when I was in elementary school, we gathered at the park near the school and played video games together, not sports. Consequently, children now have fewer opportunities to exercise than older generations. Compulsory physical education might be just one hour of exercise a week, but it can reduce the effect of video games and internet. To sum up, voluntary exercise is absolutely the best for children's wellbeing, but it is ridiculous to deprive children of their free will to choose what they do in their free time . However it is important for young people to take care of their bodies; therefore, students should exercise in P.E. class.
28 oct. 2024 12:02
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