It is my IELTS Writing task 1 :"The pie charts illustrate greenhouse gas emissions across the globe in 2002 and a projection for 2030. The bar chart shows worldwide carbon dioxide emissions in five different sectors. Overall, the amount of greenhouse gas emission produced by developing countries was the lowest and it is expected to remain this way in 2030. (This is simply not true. The lowest figure is for “transition countries” whatever they are) Additionally, it is forecast that every sector will release more carbon dioxide in 2030. Looking at the figures in more detail, regarding the two pie charts, in 2002, OECD countries accounted for just over (nearly means below) half of the total amount of greenhouse gas emissions generated, at 52%. The second highest contribution came from developing countries, comprising approximately 40%, followed by countries with transition economies, at 10%. In 2030, interestingly (you are not giving an opinion) the share from developing countries is anticipated to increase to 48%, overtaking that of OECD countries at 43 %. Countries with transition economies are estimated to take up the remaining 9%, 1% less than in 2002. Turning to the bar chart, industry was the major producer of carbon dioxide in 2002, accounting for roughly 6 billion tons, and is expected to maintain its position by reaching about 11 billion. Next comes the consumer sector, this sector released around 4 billion tons in 2002, which was nearly half of its projected figure in 2030, at just over 8 billion. It is forecast that transportation, the third largest producer, will experience a significant growth to 6 billion, triple the amount in 2002. Finally, both of waste combustion and the other sector produced approximately 1 billion, and this number is forecast to change insignificantly." Hope to receive your feedback.