Linda Melaniea
Before I go to bed, I usually drink a glass of warm water to comfort my stomach, and then I brush my teeth, and wash my face. I have never forget to rub some cajuput oil on my arms and feet, because in my place, there are a lot of mosquitoes after 5 PM. Especially today, after the heavy rain, mosquitoes are everywhere. I don't like to spray my room with a bug spray, because I can't stand the smell. Instead of a bug spray, I put a lavender diffuser in my room to get rid of the mosquitoes. It smell's so nice and relaxing.
17 gen 2021 12:22
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Before I go to bed, I usually drink a glass of warm water to settle my stomach, then I brush my teeth and wash my face. I never forget to rub some cajuput oil on my arms and feet because there are a lot of mosquitoes in my place after 5 PM. Especially today, after the heavy rain, there are mosquitoes everywhere. I don't like to spray my room with bug spray because I can't stand the smell. Instead of bug spray, I put a lavender diffuser in my room to get rid of them. It smell's so nice and relaxing.
Really good work, Linda! Here are just a few notes: - I never forget (not I have never forget) because we’re talking about a routine and so we need to use the present simple. - rearrange the sentence order “there are a lot of mosquitoes in my place (where) after 5pm (when).” - use pronouns to avoid repeating “mosquitoes” such as “them” in the second last sentence. Hope this helps!
17 gennaio 2021
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Before I go to bed, I usually drink a glass of warm water for comfort of my stomach, and then I brush my teeth, and wash my face. I have never forget to rub some cajuput oil on my arms and feet, because in my place, there are a lot of mosquitoes after 5 PM. Especially today, after the heavy rain, mosquitoes are everywhere. I don't like to spray my room with a bug spray, because I can't stand the smell. Instead of a bug spray, I put a lavender diffuser in my room to get rid of the mosquitoes. It smell's so nice and relaxing.
17 gennaio 2021
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